we were writing about ... rain at school
i found it hard to... describe the rain as i hits the floor
i found it easy to... do me senses in this rain recount
i enjoyed...it when i was in the rain and i could feel the drops of water dripping from the sky
next time i will...add a bit more describing word in my writing
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